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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-06-21 07:59 PM






One a.m
Awake in a lonely room
Missing the smell
Of your hair
On my pillow

Two a.m.
Awake in a lonely room
Aching for the feel
Of your arms
Around me

Three a.m.
Awake in a lonely room
Crying into my pillow
Needing to hear
The sound of your breathing

Four a.m.
Awake in a lonely room
Might as well get up
To face another day
Without
you

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-06-21 08:01 PM


You blow me away...

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2002-06-21 08:01 PM


Thank you...you're good for my creative ego.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-06-21 08:12 PM


Just wonderful..aren't these fun to do?

*s
M

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-06-21 08:13 PM


Fantastic,.,..taking a quick lightening break!
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5 posted 2002-06-22 12:06 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sharon, this sounds so very sad, sweet friend, I hope this doesn't relate to a current experience, for I know this heartache and it hurts me to see you possibly feel it too! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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