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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Sometimes Sometimes the night speaks your name to me It calls out in accents of love, which could be It speaks to me of such joy and endless delight That I am carried into the star spangled night I become a whisper carried to caress your lips The softest brush of your love’s fingertips Wherever you are you carry me within you And whatever you want then I’ll willingly do Sometimes the breeze carries your scent to me And I just go weak at the knees and act all girlie I sniff the air to draw your aroma deep within And feel my face flush as I recall your skin My hands actually tingle with the touch of you And my blood rushes around, as it is wants to do If I am lucky I can summon up your deep kiss And I shake with need and the wanting of this Sometimes the silence brings your voice to me And I can hear your whispers sighing so clearly I can hear your music floating in the silent air And hear you saying how much you care My ears feel your lips as they speak of dreams And how life and love isn’t at all as it seems I can hear the music flowing it plays my song And the way I want to be played my whole life long Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 [This message has been edited by Marsha (01-13-2002 01:16 PM).] |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Marsha - I sometimes act girlie myself.  :  Not sometimes, but all the time, your writing is superb. Very good. Dave (A big girlie man) |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I become a whisper carried to caress your lips .... Marsha, this one sentence will haunt me all day. I love the way you express yourself. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A superb song... but I heard you singing all along... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, That's about as romantic as you can get. *L* |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It sure looks like being in love agrees with you, Marsha.... Beautifully done!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - this flows like a song, just lovely, romantic, telling of your thoughts... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you feel this special kind of love all the time and forever sing with happiness! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dave darling boy you are just a tad biased don't you think? Thank you darling boy although if there's anyone around here who writes excellently I think it's you.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Nightshade thank you muchly this was just a little rhyme that was running in my head so I wrote it down. Isn’t it wonderful what love does to the inspiration? Mmmmmmmm and I like that line too. The whole thing was supposed to be reminiscent or a soft night breeze. I hope it came through As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my soul YOU would have done I’m never quiet and when I’m singing this loudly the whole world can hear me. Do you think anyone who really knew me would mistake me for shy and quiet? No I know not for I’m me, Marsha smiling and just plain Bubbly Thank you darling heart sister You showed me the way back up.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I can hear the music too marsha, this is wonderful. I love it. floria |
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