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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-01-01 09:49 PM


Soon the sun will melt over the horizon
Replaced by a diamond encrusted sky
How much your love propels me
And takes me to places way up high

A pair of star-crossed lovers
Here we lie upon the sand
We've been here for many hours
Admiring this wondrous land

Your arm reaches around my shoulder
As we snuggle up so tight
How passionately you now kiss me
In the fading amber light

How I'll resign myself to you
As I enjoy your warm caress
Now I'm offering you my heart
As the place for your new address

You tell me that you love me
That you'll stay here by my side
How very special you make me feel
As you take me on love's ride

On a journey way up in the heavens
Is where you'll take me
Where we'll ride together on moonbeams
A place where our spirits will be set free

We'll catch a shooting star
On the way back down to earth
How we'll marvel at love's beauty
And this feeling of rebirth

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Jamie
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1 posted 2002-01-01 09:53 PM


sounds like a wonderful place you have found
Ivy Rose
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2 posted 2002-01-01 09:54 PM


Suetang...LOVELY, PASSIONATE POEM!!!! Relly enjoyed this.  ***Ivy Rose
Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-01 09:59 PM


*sigh* sensual and filled with burning passion. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
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4 posted 2002-01-01 11:21 PM


What beauty of love in these words Sue. Heavenly indeed. *Sigh*

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-01-01 11:26 PM




(sigh) Mmmmmmmmm...sooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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