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A Red Light Smile...........
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A Red Light Smile........... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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A RED LIGHT SMILE You were stopped at lights I was waiting to cross I looked right at you And saw your gorgeous face You seemed relaxed with Your tie loose around your suit And all I could think of Was my God he is cute! You then smiled at me As if it was on cue And all I could do Was stand fixated and smile back at you The lights turned green And I had to cross Knowing already it would be my loss Not to have told you What a great smile that was! ~Roniece Dawson-Bruce~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Get yourself back there and find him, girl!!!! This was wonderfully done.  All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) So beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I too know that feeling so much, but there will always be one smile that will take your breath away forever and you will sigh to his smile forever! (kiss on cheek) May the beauty of love always fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Roniece, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce - sweet poem, brings back many memories when I would walk and see a smile... BC |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you for your comemnts - I don't think I could get through a day without smiling at someone or having someone smile back at me! Noah: you write such lovely notes - thank you for taking the time to respond to my poetry. ~Roniece~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well my friend, you do know about smiles well done!It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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