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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
This is so complete. I love the cadence and elegance of your writting. I can't think of a thing that isn't in place. Good write!!! |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
amusemi -- thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
mirror man, Once again you take a theme and weave it to perfection. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Kethry -- thank you very much. I don't know what else to say (I'm not used to perfection). |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
mirror man--The yin and yang of life...the balance that ebbs and flows..so well expressed here. Wonderful writing! |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Martie -- I never would have thought of it like that, yin and yang. Thank you very much. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
today, today and today in endless progressive a masterful means of analogy and delightful to read!Write on! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! WOW!!! I too sing the ying-yang resemblance behind these words; it helps to experience these dead thoughts to grow with compassion and rich in love to revisit the beauty of love and hope all throughout the rest of life! (sigh) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may happiness and solace fill your loving heart forever! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
ecrivan -- thank you. Yes, "today and today and today"; I find it relieves the depression. Thank you again. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A poem of sadness in a chain of life but with hope at each end. Magnificent. I love it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Startime -- yes, I didn't think of it like that, but that's it. Thank you. [This message has been edited by mirror man (01-12-2002 10:26 AM).] |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Noah -- I am truly surprised to see this yin/yang analogy here. It is not something I am very familiar with. Thank you. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
How like a chain I am. If not for abandoned love, I could not love. And if not for this Winter day, I could not hope for Spring. If not for all those dead parts of me, I could not live to live again. And these too, all these things, will go, as a chain, trail away, and end. I really like this poem, mirror man. I've read it several times, it comes through in layers. Good job on this. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Duncan -- thank you. You are all getting so much out of this. Thank you again. [This message has been edited by mirror man (01-12-2002 12:53 AM).] |
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