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Victoria
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0 posted 2002-01-11 03:47 PM



Did you ever do something you regret?
even if in a dream
or not regret something you should have
because it tasted like whip cream

Did you ever fly off to meet a stranger?
somewhere a little bit dangerous

Did you awake from a dream
and still have teardrops in your eyes
try to fall back to sleep
in arms of a romantic surprise

In a land where dreams come true
where only there is just you and who???
in a land of cotton candy wishes
a land of moonlight and roses
and Eskimos rubbing noses

Blue eyed huskies sledding you away
to a snow castle by Igloo bay
upon a bearskin rug you stay
and hope that Elvis is alive and well,
and forever in his arms you will dwell..

*now who could feel guilty about that*

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


© Copyright 2002 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-11 03:57 PM


Yes, yes, yes!!!!! Elvis is alive and well in my dreams,
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2 posted 2002-01-11 04:10 PM




YAY!!! (big hugggsssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, we can be anyone in our dreams, and we can see anything we want our hearts to see! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, Elvis will always live on, the weather will always be nice, and we will roll around in our Garden Of Eden with our imagination and loving hearts! We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-11 04:15 PM


Thank ya, thank ya very mush in my best Elvis voice.  Please e-mail me, darlin', as I've gotta hunka hunka burnin' love  heh - lil Victoria will fall for my excellent Elvis impersonation and I will be able to fool her into joining my fan club

That wazza, wazza, very nice pome, Victoria.

Actually, I did enjoy it very much.

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4 posted 2002-01-11 04:26 PM


Very pretty, Victoria.
-silver streak

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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5 posted 2002-01-11 04:55 PM


This makes me smile.  But I'll take Elvira instead.  Very good.
Victoria
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6 posted 2002-01-11 06:53 PM


thank you inot2b...i love Elvis..those last 2 lines just popped in my head out of the blue...

Noah thank you..yes dreams are wonderful arent they..i dont know where nightmares come from though haa

thank you lngjhn...for that wonderful impersonation haa...i am so happy you
peeked in today...glad you enjoyed

newell..thank you for your sweet comments

thank you mirror man...well let me know when you dream of her haa...good luck...

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7 posted 2002-01-11 08:51 PM


very good poem...a touch of humor...and as I said, I love poems about dreams. I just love this forum...smiles.


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8 posted 2002-01-11 08:58 PM


Victoria...I think we all have either wanted
to do this...or have...and feel the same way
you do...nicely said...

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9 posted 2002-01-11 09:08 PM


Flying off to meet a stranger? I hear Florida is wonderful this time of year!!

Elvis has not yet left the building!

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10 posted 2002-01-11 09:16 PM


Victoria - Did you Ever?  I have... And a great poem///

BC

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11 posted 2002-01-11 09:31 PM


Victoria, This one made me smile and hope for a trip to dreamland quite shortly. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Victoria
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12 posted 2002-01-11 09:40 PM


thank you humblebee..and welcome to the forum..I hope you enjoy yourself..

thank you Magnus..If you cant fly away for more than a day ha..yes dream the night away

Deery..ha..i love Naples this time of year.. thank you for the invite ha.

Bill.. Shhhhh

Chris..Good luck with your dreams thanks Chris

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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13 posted 2002-01-12 10:49 AM


Often thought about it, but....*LOL* maybe one day.... lovely words ~V~


Lauren~

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and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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14 posted 2002-01-12 11:06 AM


the land of wishes and want-nots
that's where i want to be  *s*  
Every time i read your words, i get happily lost.

sooo nice, Victoria, and psssst.....bP says hi *wink*

tSR

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15 posted 2002-01-12 11:55 AM


Lauren..thank you...Glad you enjoyed my dreamland ha..

Shadowrider..winkie dink back haa.. thank you for peeking in ..always nice hearing from you...

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