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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-01-11 09:14 AM



The Passion Has Died

~*Marge Tindal*~

He saw the look in my eyes
When I said, “The passion has died.”
The bloom of passion has felt the chill
of nights without the cover of you still …
Now it has no chance to survive
Why couldn’t we keep the passion alive ?

He hung his head in sheepish chagrin
Said, “Lover … I forgot to cover
the passion before the chill arrived.”
“Tell me what can I do … to make it up to you ?”
“Can I plant you another ?”



*Tee-Hee … ‘somebody’ didn’t cover our Passion plant*
Isn’t that right, Sweetie ?
January 10, 2002

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2002-01-11 09:19 AM


Well will he plant another?? Cute write from you Marge in your creative way...always...HUGS...

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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2 posted 2002-01-11 09:22 AM


Very playful.  Fun to read and just flow with this good mixture of love and teasing.
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3 posted 2002-01-11 09:34 AM


ROFL... You minx. *G* I guess he had a few other things on his mind? *G* Get out the seed catalog! *G* That plant's demise ought to be good for several evenings of snuggling... which means it didn't die in vain. *G*
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4 posted 2002-01-11 10:03 AM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart HOW much this reveals your spirit, I love it, a wonderful bubble of joy on this beautiful day

Wonderful darling girl, I really do love this cute little one from you



Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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5 posted 2002-01-11 10:08 AM


I think i need one of those around here haa..
loved Margie...hugs

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6 posted 2002-01-11 10:24 AM


*giggling* silly girl...when I saw the title my heart dropped....LOL I am so glad this is about the passion flower...I didn't even know there was such a thing...I am sure he will plant a new one and have a sparkle of his own passion in his eyes as he does. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2002-01-11 10:36 AM



You almost had me worried...

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8 posted 2002-01-11 10:47 AM


Yes, me too...Marge....but, well...enjoyed the cute write....
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9 posted 2002-01-11 11:00 AM


Marge--If I remember correctly, Passions Vines are almost impossible to kill...it will probably come back with a vengance.  Loved the smile in this poem!
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10 posted 2002-01-11 11:05 AM


Marge,
Maybe this will help. Enjoyed

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11 posted 2002-01-11 11:07 AM


As long as he tends to the right passion, you'll be ok!! Cute one Marge.
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12 posted 2002-01-11 12:01 PM


Marge!  My heart jumped up into my throat when I saw the title!!  So glad to hear it is about a plant!  I'm sure he will make it up to you...
~hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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13 posted 2002-01-11 01:28 PM


I must admit, you had me worried too, Marge.......glad its just a plant
phew!!!!!!!!
Great writing again!

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14 posted 2002-01-11 02:30 PM


GreenEyes~
You betcha' he will !  Thanks gal~

Canuckster~
Thanks~

SuthernGal~
Tee-Hee~ .. You tickle me~
Yeppers ... the man WAS BUSY~
You're a doll~

MarshaLove~
Just having a whole buncha' fun with my baby~
Thanks sweetie~

Victoria~
He's a great gardener TOO~

StarTime~
Gotcha~
O ... here's a link to information on the beautiful Passion Vine and their lovely flowers~
http://members.aol.com/pasiflora1

Karilea~
*giggles

Amigo~
Thanks ... I'm just *giggling* over each reply~

Martie~
Yeppers ... but let's don't tell Bill that just yet~
Guilt is such WONDERFUL make-up incentive~

Seymour~
Oooooooh, yes~
Just the 'manure' I needed
to bring that passion back to life ! !

PoetdeVine~
LOL .... and THAT he does~

Enchantress~
Ahhhhhh, I'm sure he will !
Thanks gal~

Lyra~
'Just a plant' ?  'Just a plant' ?
But .... but ..... it's a Passion plant ! !
Tee-Hee ... thanks for the little 'sneezy-plant'~

****Hugs to all of you fun-loving folks~
~*Marge*~

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15 posted 2002-01-11 02:57 PM


Geesh you truly got me with the title, glad that it was one of your cute gems Marge.

(((hugs to you and Bill))
Charisma

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16 posted 2002-01-11 03:31 PM


Marge - Yanno, when the passion dies, you just have to get it growing again.  I thought this was a very cute poem.
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17 posted 2002-01-11 03:37 PM


The flower of passion is exotic and sweet...
potent enough to tame a wild thing.
Dry out the flower and steep up some tea.
nothing like passion to rock you to sleep!

cute marge, and my favorite flower and coincidentally, an excellent bedtime tea!

heh heh. Hugs.

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18 posted 2002-01-12 11:55 AM


You had me scared there for a minute, Marge! This is cute!
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19 posted 2002-01-12 12:03 PM


Marge, Marge, Marge, you do have a way with words! Very cute poem.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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20 posted 2002-01-16 02:19 PM


Charisma~
Tee-Hee-Hee~
My baby liked it too~

LongJohn~
Yeppers ... that's just what I told him~
Thanks my friend~

Serenity~
*grins* ... yes it is ~

Denise~
LOL ... well, you should have seen that poor little Passion Vine~
Florida frost got the poor little thing~
Good to see you, sweet friend~

Elizabeth~
*giggles*
Thank you ...  this one just felt sooooo easy~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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