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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-01-08 12:56 PM


You, sweetest of dreams
cradle my head lovingly
sweetening all dreams
~*~
when I awake dear
your soft eyes bathe me in love
better than my dream
~*~
our lips meet softly
our embrace grows in soft warmth
sweet oblivion
~*~
Inspired by SEA by a reply to one of my previous works.


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-08 12:58 PM


This is so loving and sweet

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

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2 posted 2002-01-08 01:06 PM


This is so sweet!! Words of love...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-01-08 01:19 PM


InterLoper~
You breathe your way through such lovely inspire~
It is warminly wonderful to feel the breath of you upon the page~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2002-01-08 01:32 PM



Darn, but don't we like it when you are inspired!

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5 posted 2002-01-08 01:47 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your words sing with the bliss and beauty of heavenly dreams! (big hugggsssss) May true love forever caress your beating heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You are the Inspirator! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-01-08 01:54 PM


Doesnt it make you mad when you are about to be kissed in a dream and you wake up haa...this is very sweet indeed interloper:

                ~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


Interloper
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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2002-01-08 02:16 PM


Colleen ~
Why, thank you

Mon Cherie ~
Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Isn't it tomorrow there?

Marge ~
The breath of me gasps at the heart of you

Sunshine ~
There is plenty of inspiration here at Passions, don't you agree?

Noah ~
Now you've gone and given away my secret ...

Victoria ~
I have to admit the dream must suffice until the real thing comes along.  But when it does, no amount of dreaming can compare

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Ocelot
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8 posted 2002-01-08 03:04 PM


Fantastic...so lovely and loving.  I just see these words in my head and I can't help but feel delight.  I loved this one.  Kudos,

+| ... Ocelot ... |+

SEA
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with you
9 posted 2002-01-08 04:36 PM


well now, isn't this lovely....makes me ready for some cuddlin
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