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Open Poetry #18

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Ocelot
Junior Member

since 2002-01-07

Posts 40
Texas

0 posted 2002-01-08 02:05 AM

Unexpected Results

Entrance upon the household of time,
Has left me sifting through the ashes,
Of a let down so deep I can't breathe,

What I feel is real,
What I know is real,
What I am,
I am all that I am,

If you can not trust me,
How can you love me?
Don't speak,
For it may turn me off,

I don't want good things,
I wan't truth,
Bring me truth,
And we shall bring love

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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2002-01-08 02:07 AM

Honesty and Popeye-I like it

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-01-08 02:09 AM

Yes!! You have voiced a certain truth.

This really stirs... looking forward to reading more..

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-08 11:35 AM

(sigh) So well said, sweet friend, acceptance and faithfulness are chief aspects of eternal love; always follow your loving heart and you will find love always in your heart as well as hope and joy! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ocelot, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

4 posted 2002-01-08 11:48 AM

If you can not trust me,
How can you love me?
Don't speak,
For it may turn me off,

Wise words if I ever read 'em!!

Cool write!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-01-08 11:54 AM

Ocelot,
Reads like a pussy cat to me. Enjoyed

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