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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123
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Frost-bitten wall of crackled, crystallized caramel; immense, fluorescent, breathing mass of stoppage, deliberately picked at, bitten, mazed cleavage to a Pacific calm. Perched on the peak of a continent, head raised to orange vaudeville clouds, hesitating the leap east, I’m reminded of Hegel - I grasp with green swollen fingers at a crack of ego – perhaps a grappling hook and a boost from the moon, perhaps just patience. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
craigrk, I have read this several times and think I know what you are saying and then the next time I read, I think something else. No matter...I still like it. Good job, ME |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Cool thought provoking piece. Please tell how you came to this!! |
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