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Hypnosis
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0 posted 2002-01-07 10:09 PM


Never Change
by Randy Meador

I see you here
I have nothing to fear
For you are the one for me
The only one to my heart who possesses the key

Your humor brightens my day
Much more than I can even say
Your love has entered my soul
Not a day with you seems to be dull

Don't ever change girl, no
Never change

As I look into your eyes
All I can do is let out joyful sighs
Then we kiss,
Sending me into a state of bliss

With my fingers I strum your beautiful hair
And touch your face with most care
You're as pretty as a pearl
I'm glad I can call you my girl

Don't ever change, girl
Never change

[This message has been edited by Hypnosis (01-07-2002 10:17 PM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-01-07 10:13 PM




(sigh) Very lovely, sweet friend, with a loving heart like yours you are destined to have many girls falling to your feet, swooning to your golden quills voice! (big hugggssssss) May the love of your life give you true happiness always, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Randy, thank you for sharing!



May love and liught always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-08 12:30 PM


Hey Randy, this could be a song, its really good. I hope you will continue to be this happy for a long long time. You deserve it.

Joanna

ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-01-08 12:47 PM


Yes, it could be a country melody, with don't ever change girl as a refrain...I enjoyed this!


Ocelot
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4 posted 2002-01-08 02:10 AM


Makes me think of my girl...   I like this one.  Kudos,

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passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-01-08 04:48 AM


nice one, like some romance novel or love song...but truth is that people change, may be good or bad, but nothing ever stays the same so my philosophy is to never get comfortable.
dawn to dusk
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6 posted 2002-01-08 09:09 AM


Oh Randy, this is wonderful!  It's BEAUTIFULLY written!!!  "The only one to my heart who posseses the key"  Great Work!


I love you


Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly"  Langston Hughes

vandana
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7 posted 2002-01-08 10:36 AM


nice write
N orth Carolina Girl
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8 posted 2002-01-16 10:00 AM


Randy now this is what I call love.Very,very sweet.



Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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