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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-01-07 03:16 PM


Dance Of The Hummingbird
~*~
Trees stir as the breath of God flows
a hummingbird dances for a winter rose
insanely happy
he hovers in a sunbeam of gold
enraptured by this bright and shiny jewel
I can only believe
there is a God
~*~

BloomingRose



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Victoria
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1 posted 2002-01-07 03:26 PM


It is the little things that make us the happiest ..lovely images as always Deb hugss

                ~Victoria~

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2 posted 2002-01-07 03:45 PM


BloomingRose,

  This is just lovely You paint such georgus pictures with your words.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
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3 posted 2002-01-07 05:59 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! This is soooooo cute and heavenly, I love hummingbirds and smiles can be so contagious just watching then flitter and kissing a rose or feeding from the feeder! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, the simple beauties fill your golden words! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-07 06:12 PM


How can one see these things and not believe in God. lovely write. floria
Suetang
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5 posted 2002-01-07 06:36 PM


BloomingRose
Such a stunning piece of imagery you have given us here.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2002-01-07 07:03 PM


Victoria~ The little things in life are what makes it beautiful. Thank you, glad you enjoyed.

Tara~ Thank you for your kind words.

Noah~ Thank you sweetie *hugs*

Floria~ My thoughts are the same as yours.
Thanks for reading.

BloomingRose
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7 posted 2002-01-07 07:05 PM


oops.. missed ya suetang...thank you.
Ocelot
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8 posted 2002-01-07 07:22 PM


This poem reminds me of the hummingbirds that would fly by my house...so soft, sweet and serene.  Loved it!  

+| ... Ocelot ... |+

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2002-01-07 07:24 PM


This is a breath of beauty
Thank you
Liz

kitkat
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10 posted 2002-01-07 08:30 PM


this was lovely..the humming bird such a tiny creature yet so strong and quickly it flutters....dancing for the sweet nectar the flower holds.
BloomingRose
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11 posted 2002-01-08 12:46 PM


Ocelot~ I too enjoy those lovely birds. Thank you for your reply.


Liz~ Thank you much!

kitkat~ I think the little bird holds facination beyond any bird I've ever seen..another beautiful creature from the creator.
Thank you for reading.

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