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Night Breezes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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The softness of the night breeze across your face. Caressing your soul and mind, a beautiful place. The warmth of a hug given, never taken away. A passionate kiss from heaven, yearning to say.. I will take you with me, to a soft place so serene. Where hope and dreams are bathed in a sheen. My eyes will bask in the glow of greatest beauty As my hands do take away the aches and misery. For in the dark of night I will surely remain and come within your light time and again. The silhouette of your shape under the moon does cause a heart to skip and a mind to swoon. As you lie alone within your warm soft bed. Dream of wondrous things, of joy within your head. For I wait beneath your tower, your peace my call. Waiting to catch you in my arms, when you fall. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my....oh my...you are doing it again, Magnus.....*sigh* sensually romantic....this kind of poetry flows through your pen like love flows through your heart. MAGNIFICENT...into my library this one goes. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you cast silhouettes of true love agaianst the moon in your beautiful words! (smiles) I love it, sweet friend, your heaveny words always sing across these pages! I love it, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
Wow! I am humbled. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Barry! More Northern *Sighs* On The Way!! Well done! Hugs, Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
You are so good at writing this type of romantic poetry, nice one again. floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
another romantic poem..I think ill call you Mr.Valentine ha... ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is so lovely.....you have such a romanitcally soft touch [This message has been edited by SEA (01-06-2002 10:33 PM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is as delicate as the breezes that you speak of. . . well done Sir. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, just don't let it collect a lot of dust in your library...You must reread it once in a while...Thanx.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah my man, thanx again... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mac Attack...neat name...Thank You and You are welcome...glad You enjoyed. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy, hope the Pneu is not getting You... get well soon...Thanx for the sighs.... always a good SIGN... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Floria, it is almost second nature for me. I enjoy writing romance... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Victoria...that is OK with me...I used to be called something else that was rather nice, but that was then... Happy you enjoyed the write..I enjoy doing it.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, glad you SO liked it...enjoyed.. thanx.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sven, thank you...been a very busy day today, lucky that I had time to pen it out. I too like the softness of the breeze.. so soothing.. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Softly romantic, Barry... I hope that she appreciates you. Hugs from a married woman in Michigan.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Lyra...from a married man in S. Carolina...YES...she does appreciate me. I have to remind myself every now and then. But YES...she does..and she enjoys my words from time to time...sometimes gets a tear or two... |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
SO ROMANTIC!!!!!!!! Every word a dance of love. You invite us along on this night of dreamy surrender. GREAT POEM, MAGNUS!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ivy Rose...you are a gifted lady yourself... thank you much...I am just showering all of you with words I enjoy expressing... |
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