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Lily B
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since 2000-03-31

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Auburn, IN, US

0 posted 2002-01-01 12:10 PM

Snow-capped mountain stands
regal in its splendour; dark
shadow at its foot.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-01-01 12:13 PM

Very nice!

Lily B
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since 2000-03-31

Posts 91
Auburn, IN, US

2 posted 2002-01-01 12:15 PM

Thank you very much!!
:)

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-01 12:22 PM

(smiles) Again your beautiful words amaze me, sweet friend, these haikus are soooooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) HAPPY NEW YEAR, SWEET FRIEND!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

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Florida

4 posted 2002-01-01 12:45 PM

I'm impressed!
Well done Haiku.

Deb

Lily B
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since 2000-03-31

Posts 91
Auburn, IN, US

5 posted 2002-01-01 12:48 PM

Thank you, Deb and Noah, for responding so sweetly... it brings a lasting smile to my face!

:)

~Julie~

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2002-01-01 01:57 PM

So enjoyed this, I know where Auburn is, and we do have a lot of snow in Indiana dont' we?

I am/Kathleen/

Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-01 01:59 PM

A majestic vision in so few words. Beautiful. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Lily B
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since 2000-03-31

Posts 91
Auburn, IN, US

8 posted 2002-01-01 02:02 PM

Thank you both... I'm glad you enjoyed!!
:)

And, YES!, we usually have WAY too much snow in Indiana. Though we've been lucky so far. I can handle this MILD stuff.
THANKS AGAIN, fellow Hoosier!

~Julie~

Kit McCallum

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9 posted 2002-01-01 09:25 PM

Beautiful imagery Lily ... paints a lovely visual!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lily B
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since 2000-03-31

Posts 91
Auburn, IN, US

10 posted 2002-01-03 05:16 PM

Also see
Haiku #2: /pip/Forum53/HTML/000036.html
Haiku #3: /pip/Forum53/HTML/000037.html

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

11 posted 2002-01-03 05:30 PM

Powerful words here. Great work!

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

12 posted 2002-01-03 06:32 PM

nice

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

13 posted 2002-01-03 11:27 PM

technically, each line of a haiku should be a complete thought in itself...

but i enjoyed the read nonetheless...

keep posting..i am a sucker for haikus..

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

14 posted 2002-01-03 11:30 PM

Beautiful haiku
So suddle, modest, and proud.
God Bless you Lily.

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

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