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monique
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0 posted 2002-02-13 06:54 PM



Happy Valentine

Hop on my back
Ad your arms around my neck
Piggy ride here we go
Piggy ride no more
You are too heavy

Voyage in your mind
Alone in your cell
Locating a breakthrough
Escaping reality
Needless to say
Two is better than one
Inserting my hand in your hand
Near your spirit
Embracing a dream going pouf!

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1 posted 2002-02-13 07:43 PM


WOW! This was powerful.

Loved it!

~~Jeff~~

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2 posted 2002-02-13 07:45 PM


How sad, Monique. But keep holding those hands, and remembering the hugs. And you can all dream new dreams.
monique
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3 posted 2002-02-14 06:43 PM


Dear Jeff, i know a few people who are in prison and i feel powerless over their situation.
Midnitesun, i love your name.

monique

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