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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-02-11 12:04 PM

Delicate the petals,
of primrose at dawn,
Wakening to sun’s rise,
in nighttime’s begone.

Gentle the fragrance,
that wafts from primrose,
on whispers of wind,
in new day’s disclose.

Sweet scent of Eros,
enwrapped in red lace,
primrose in splendor,
simple her grace.

Gem of the dawning,
beauty transcendent,
pristine in glory,
jeweled blooming resplendent.

From nature’s womb,
a primrose is grown,
to sit atop,
her regal thorned throne.

Rubied eruption,
springs forth scarlet blaze,
from kiss of the morning,
from sun’s warming rays.

Enchanting her subjects,
rules queen of sun’s spawn,
primrose of morning,
red jewel of the dawn.

[This message has been edited by Tim (02-11-2002 12:09 AM).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-02-11 12:08 PM

STANDING OVATION!!!this poem is absolutely stunning and I am putting it in my library...Thank you...I am in awe...beautiful does not begin to describe it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-11 08:08 AM

(smiles) WOW!!! BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT, THIS IS GORGEOUS!!! (sigh) Your gorgeous words paint flowers of spring so beautifully, may this red jewel of dawn forever sparkle like a ruby with the rest of Mother Nature! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true gem of a poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-11-2002 08:08 AM).]

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2002-02-11 10:52 AM

Beautiful and enchanting. Love it.

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

4 posted 2002-02-11 10:56 AM

This is very well written and very vivid and intense in both the images and feelings it conveys.

Very well written poem.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-02-11 11:30 AM

Very lovely, Tim!

Archiveghost
Junior Member

since 2002-02-09

Posts 16

6 posted 2002-02-11 10:28 PM

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skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

7 posted 2002-02-12 12:10 PM

What a beautiful sunrise poem.

sky

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