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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2002-02-10 11:54 PM

I may write a thousand poems
but none of them could say
how it is I long to hold you
till night turns into day

touching you
all I am
is yours

I could spend a thousand nights
still need a lifetime more
to lie with you in dreamland
not dreaming anymore

touch me
all you are
is mine

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-02-11 12:01 PM

awww duncan, this is so soft and cuddly.
I see you're a victim of cupid too!!!

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-02-11 12:05 PM

*sigh* she is a lucky girl to have touch you as deeply as she has..this is such a beautiful poem of your declaration of love...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2002-02-11 12:11 PM

A thousand poems you may write
How you long to hold me near
But I don’t need them to know
All I need is you my dear

Okay, a lame poetic response..but hey, it’s past my bedtime!!! You know I’m loving this one. I think it’s definitely one of my favourites Did I tell you yet today?

Now I’m off to bed for real this time!!…night darlin.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2002-02-11 01:02 AM

Duncan,

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! I LOVE this!!! *sighs* I love romance.. and this definately has it. Wonderful and sweet and tender. Very much enjoyed

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2002-02-11 01:15 AM

Duncan...a lovely right, but don't touch me!

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

6 posted 2002-02-11 03:46 AM

Bah humbug!!! Just kiddin'...Great write!!!

(wrong holiday anyway!)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-02-11 08:22 AM

(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet freind, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (big hugggssssss) May the cupids shower you with arrows and make all your dreams come true forever! We all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-02-11 08:34 AM

Wonderful write Duncan! I'll bet someone special had sweet dreams after reading this!

~Hugs to you both, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-02-11 08:44 AM

I'm looking for a happy ever after for the two of you

Sandra

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

10 posted 2002-02-11 09:39 AM

*sigh*

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-02-11 12:27 PM

Duncan, who wouldnt love to get this on valentines day. Or any day for that matter, such a romantic poem. lovely indeed.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

12 posted 2002-02-11 12:41 PM

Lovely, lovely, lovely!

*smiles*

~Tier

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

13 posted 2002-02-11 02:23 PM

I love the romance.

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