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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2002-01-04 06:55 PM



Your face.....
a flame consuming
my inhibitions.Your arms
a vise squeezing me tightly,
firmly in their grip.And, you
are the Sun...rays
permeating the heat of my soul,
warming the slow burn
of my ardor.My soul languishes
in time.Awaiting the touch
of your searching kiss,
the feel of your smooth skin
merging with my own saffron-mellow
flesh.My soul pants after you
breathless with the taste
of the air that you breathed before.
Your scent still hanging
in the air...suspended in instant
wonder, slow dancing with joyous tears
at your nearness, your incomparable
grace.And, you are the breath
of me, the hollowed-out soul
that asks to be filled with
the very heart, the very thought of me.

© Copyright 2002 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
strbbux
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1 posted 2002-01-04 06:57 PM


Ivy Rose this is so tender and so romantic , what a lovely write. floria
Suetang
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2 posted 2002-01-04 06:57 PM


Hello Ivy Rose
This was simply stunning and very much enjoyed.  Take care....Sue

Suetang

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2002-01-04 07:16 PM


your thoughts are so in tune with my own this evening.  I enjoyed this.

My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write.

Joe Houck
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4 posted 2002-01-04 07:59 PM


"slow dancing with joyous tears
at your nearness"

Tight words.....I liked this poem alot =)

Joe

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5 posted 2002-01-04 08:01 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you breathe the essence of love in all your gorgeous words! (smiles) May the beauty of love forever strum the lyre of the spirit within! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-01-04 08:01 PM


Very nice...James
Startime
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7 posted 2002-01-04 11:43 PM


WOW!!!!This one breathes love and passion with every word...Absolutely magnificent. I love it, Ivy...your weaving is sizzling tonight. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus
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8 posted 2002-01-05 04:10 PM


Ivy...this little baby is sizzling with
passion and the yearning of another...
Whewwww..

~lewisone~
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since 2001-11-23
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Virginia
9 posted 2002-01-05 06:07 PM


Love does wonders.....But most can not sum it up in sweet,passionate words, you did an excellant job....Enjoyed!
                       ~lewisone~

Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan
10 posted 2002-01-05 06:08 PM


I love the romance and the passion in this one, Ivy.....
a perfect love poem!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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