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brianbeaudry
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0 posted 2002-02-09 07:11 PM


Heart’s Intentions

I look at you with a saddened heart
There is no need for this to start
I did no wrong you know it’s true
Now you say to me we’re through
It’s not been easy this past year
Many a fight, and many a tear
But through it all I say to you
My feelings real, my love is true
You say you’re tired, need a break
But hun, it’s our very lives at stake
So please think twice before this move
Please give me time, and let me prove
That this is wrong, this step you make
Help me stay you this great mistake
“There’s no more time for us” you say
“I’m sorry that I have to go this way
Your time is spent with pen in hand
Only in poems do you take a stand
Your time is stretched quite thin
Against this passion how can I win
How do I do battle with a foe unseen
Of this I know you think me mean
Your true passion is words that rhyme
And I come second most of the time”
You are never second is my reply
This I have proven, you cannot lie
Most are poems of love for you
I write them from a heart that’s true
They speak the words I cannot voice
To be this way was not my choice
My feelings need escape you see
And this is the only way for me
My love for you is beyond measure
Our lives together, my only treasure
So promise me that you will stay
Please help us to find a middle way
I’ll find more time to hold you dear
But of my poems please never fear
They speak sentiments from my heart
They were never meant to have us part
So please let’s end this sad contention
With acceptance of my heart’s intention
Within these words I voice my heart
Of which you own the greatest part.

© Copyright 2002 Brian Beaudry - All Rights Reserved
Alan
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1 posted 2002-02-09 07:28 PM


Brian my friend.. this is beautiful. I hope it works out for you.
alan

skyshine
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2 posted 2002-02-09 07:31 PM


Oh my Lord. I hope with all my heart everything goes well with you, Brian.

sky

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-02-09 08:04 PM


Brian,
It will work out, I had the same problem. Good write.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-02-09 08:12 PM


Oh Brian, she is probably very proud of your writing and would really like a hug.
Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2002-02-09 10:29 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Soooooooo beautifully compassionate, sweet freind, I hope that you and your love work this out together and she will cry to the beauty of your words and give you a hug, for I know deep down that she'll love you so much always for the gorgeous words you dedicate to her! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-10 10:25 AM


Brian this is so so heartfelt to me.. You seem my husband is a sports freak, and I always resented it. Now I write , and we both are happy, and I wonder why this writing didn't come to me sooner. Although I do have other interests, painting etc. But I so understand this.. it is a  50-50 proposition..both sides working together, This poem is simply wonderful, and so heartfelt. Luck to you, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

brianbeaudry
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7 posted 2002-02-10 10:47 AM


Thank you Alan, it did
Skyshine..thanks it worked out
Seymore..good to see I'm not alone..thanks
Enchantress... I hug her every day but poetry is not her thing
Naoh....thanks, you are a special friend
Floria... we came to an agreement, I write when she is at work...I hug her when she is home!!!

peaches73533
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8 posted 2002-02-10 10:54 AM


Brian,
I'm sorry to hear this.I hope it all works out for you.I know a little of what you feel.I can't even get my husband to read my writes and sometimes it causes problems for us.He doesn't understand without this outlet I would reverse back inside myself and lose myself completly.It hurts me so that he won't even read one.My best wishes and prayers are sent your way my friend.
Peaches

skyshine
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9 posted 2002-02-10 09:29 PM


I'm glad that everything worked out, Brian!

sky

[This message has been edited by skyshine (02-10-2002 09:30 PM).]

Startime
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10 posted 2002-02-11 12:23 PM


BRIAN!!!!*sigh* you are handling it the best way for both of you....Oh gosh...I am so glad you worked things out...My heart twisted with pain for you...*sigh* I hope I can find a man who understands my need to write....**big big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Suetang
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11 posted 2002-02-11 04:13 PM


Hello Brian

This was so beautiful yet so very sad.  I hope it wasn't written from personal experience but judging from the power of your words I am lead to believe that is the case.  I hope life is good for you.

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

ethome
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12 posted 2002-02-11 04:15 PM


Wow! what a write!
I hope this all works out for you!

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