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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-02-09 07:08 PM



Isn't this special!!!!

Must try to post again

My lady, wilt thee come to mine eyes?
Mine eyes flow tears of brine for thee sight.
Doth thee not see with thine own is true?
Doth thee know I love thee, thee I do?

‘Pon mount high I rest at break of day.
Golden sun’s rays cast my love to thee.
‘Pon yon heavens this treasure does be.
Doth thee know, tis true lips,  not lies.

I wish thy heart be mine own to carry
for in my chest thy memory doth stay.
I ask thee that ‘gainst time do scurry
for within thine heart my soul does lay.

Giveth me thy Spring of love to hold
Let thy heat of Summer be so bold.
Wilt thee lie in warmth of Winter’s light?
For thou art whom I yearn each night.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (02-09-2002 07:25 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-09 07:10 PM


Barry~

can ya not see???? LOL sorry....humor....will come back when the poem is here.....

Lauren~

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2 posted 2002-02-09 07:19 PM


i love the sexy sheer letters   mmmm

now you have dressed properly haa..in those Shakespearian clothes..i do love this..i love thou thy thee ye and thine very much

             ~Victoria~

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-09-2002 07:38 PM).]

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-02-09 07:26 PM


Lauren and Vic...you both are just too
cute....

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4 posted 2002-02-09 07:33 PM


Barry, how could I come to thine eyes in the dark?  I couldn't see ye, or thine eyes!  Just kidding...
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Magnus
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5 posted 2002-02-09 07:45 PM


Nancy...I love how yu girls find our weak
spot...and give us a gentle kick or two....

Yep,  what a way to post a poem...glad you
liked the braille version...

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6 posted 2002-02-09 10:43 PM


So nice

Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie.


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7 posted 2002-02-09 10:47 PM




(smiles) Yep, yep, yep, you certainly are wearing Shakespeare's clothes, and you sure do fit in them so beautifully! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-02-10 01:05 AM


Yearn, dost thou
for this heart of mine?
Come, partake
for this love is thine...

beautiful poem...

~Tier

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9 posted 2002-02-10 08:30 AM


Barry, this IS a Valentine in itself!

Kathleen--(Kay)
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Laurie Lee



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10 posted 2002-02-10 09:59 AM


sorry I missed all the fun, and since I am having eye problems, I would have thought it was me and freaked...so glad I didnt see the blank page,,,Hmm I think that is what you guys are talking about. Going good with this type magnus, It is difficult. romantic poem. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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peaches73533
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11 posted 2002-02-10 10:14 AM


Magnus,
Good going here.I have to admit I used to not read alot shakespeare style things, but as I read them more and more I'm beginning to enjoy them more.You do it so well.
peaches

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