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brianbeaudry
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0 posted 2002-02-09 09:11 AM


Hard Back, Soft Front

Stress, hardship plague our day
Anxiety tears at our nerves
Seems we cannot share with life
The calmness that it deserves

Armor must be a part of us
Shield against the pain
To block the hurt of treachery
Hard back we must maintain

Razor blades of emotions
Slash the softest heart
This edge we must temper
If soft front would impart

We must balance both extremes
Yet let love be our guide
Brush off that which does offend
Hold tight to good inside

Brian Beaudry



© Copyright 2002 Brian Beaudry - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-09 09:14 AM


Brian, now this was for me this morning, And I do thank you. It really filled my soul after my trials of yesterday, very true, very heartfelt. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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2 posted 2002-02-09 09:16 AM


I'm smiling...

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3 posted 2002-02-09 02:36 PM




(sigh) Soooooo very well-said, sweet friend, love must always be our guide and what we believe in, but we also must always wear our armor over our chests to face justice and truyth when there is unfairness! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-02-09 02:51 PM


Very very nicely penned, Brian.


~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-02-09 02:51 PM


Very very nicely penned, Brian.


~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2002-02-09 03:02 PM


Wonderful rhythm and great message here.
There is so much truth in your words.

Really nice writing.

amusemi
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7 posted 2002-02-09 03:22 PM


The toughest job of all is exactly what you so graciously penned!!  Sir poet, you said it very, very well!

KAt

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with you
8 posted 2002-02-09 03:56 PM


"We must balance both extremes
Yet let love be our guide"

yes

Suetang
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9 posted 2002-02-09 03:56 PM


Hello Brian

This was wonderfully written and so very true, I loved it!  

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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