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Corinne
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0 posted 2002-02-08 02:42 PM


Foot Paths

I’m in the mood
for trimming laces,
all those
d
a
n
g
l
i
n
g
ends.

They
never lash properly -
I wind up
in knots.

I’m tired
of bending over
to fasten
l  o  o  p  s
that never stay
tied.

Let me
walk
barefoot.

© 2002 CMB

[This message has been edited by Corinne (02-08-2002 02:44 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-02-08 02:53 PM




(smiles) Oooohhhh...I love the pun you use here, this sounds like a cry for freedom! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may we all embrace harmony and run freely in our imaginations and dreams! We all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corrine, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Startime
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2 posted 2002-02-08 02:54 PM


*giggling* oh gosh this made me wish for summer...I love walking barefoot...especially on the beach...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2002-02-08 02:54 PM


Corinne,
Good idea and a lovely write.

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2002-02-08 07:27 PM


Corinne I love the poem. And? I love going barefoot so much that I wear these, well, they are macrame' strings--and from the top, they look like sandals...but my feet still connect with the earth nicely beneath! (shoes without soles...)

Wiggling my toes here, corinne...nice!

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5 posted 2002-02-08 07:47 PM


My toes wriggled happily when I read this. But for now, I'll keep my shoes on, it's zero outside. Of course, this is more about unfettered 'freedom' than about feet.

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Corinne
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6 posted 2002-02-08 11:16 PM


Thank you all for your kind words!

Cor

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7 posted 2002-02-09 09:04 AM


Corinne, a big my favorite way to be, shoeless.. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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8 posted 2002-02-09 11:00 AM


enjoy
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