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Duncan
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0 posted 2002-02-07 11:02 PM




My heart doesn’t hurt, anymore
all I want to do is to love you
yet I still have no idea how to get from A to B
can you help me with an equation
nevermind
just remembered
you’re not good with math
that’s ok
you’re good with me
I’ll find my way
but I may need to hold your hand

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amusemi
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2002-02-07 11:05 PM


Awesome work, Duncan, cute, sweet and to the point.  I liked this part:

"you’re good with me
I’ll find my way"

Reads like music!!!

Kat

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-02-07 11:05 PM


Ah Duncan, I am sure Tracey will hold your hand and show you the way from point A to point B, no problem.  All will work out as it should be.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Elizabeth
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3 posted 2002-02-07 11:06 PM


A guiding hand always helps, Duncan.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
4 posted 2002-02-07 11:12 PM


You know I’ll hold your hand every step of the way. No, my math skills leave a little to be desired, but hey, I know the alphabet pretty good!! I’ll hold your hand, you’ll warm my feet, and we’ll both be happy. ….the old saying “the blind leading the blind” comes to mind here…but I’ve got my contacts in…how bout you?? Lol

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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with you
5 posted 2002-02-07 11:53 PM


Cowboy
this is so touching....
and for the record, I'm not good at math  

[This message has been edited by SEA (02-07-2002 11:53 PM).]

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Gaia
6 posted 2002-02-08 12:04 PM


All the math you need to know you learned in Kindergarten...or pre-school. And even that was wrong. One plus one doesn't make two. It makes a bigger happier One.
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