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Open Poetry #18

One Time at Band Camp

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-02-07 01:22 AM

Songs sung
Rhymes wrung
From sweaty hands of lovers
Who place a
Cold
Quaint
Attitude
To use beneath the covers

The word they want
'Security'
“It’s pure
To me”
They say
The blanketed effect
Of lust
Is love
In diff’rent way

But that’s a pathetic fallacy
In truth their names are sown
Inside their jammies
Off at camp
Their parents should have known

Neither want this night to end
They live on sep’rate coasts
Forever
Never
Severed
Ties
“In life you make the most”

Counselor
makes the rounds
He wouldn’t miss a thing
bangs His nightstick
on the rail
“Lights out”
He likes to sing

Reality
finds them both in bed
spouses
written from their heads
houses
turned into the dead
and
now Suh
We hopes there’s
Somethin said

Something outside of the tensioned “Maybe”
Cuz neither know bout birthin babies

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (02-07-2002 01:23 AM).]

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2002-02-07 07:19 AM

This doesn't sound like any band camp I ever attended... hm... Maybe that's my problem... Interesting write, wayout..

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-02-07 12:02 PM

hey walt, your title drew me in,
im sure you know why

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-07 12:04 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo clever and wonderful, sweet friend, I too have never recalled a band meeting like that! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

elisaseyes
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 196
fort worth texas

4 posted 2002-02-08 12:12 PM

What you doing in the pie?

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