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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-01-04 10:39 AM


Gifts Upon Heartstrings

No obstacles blocking
Heart given clear view
Sharing moon and stars
Able to reach with you

Nothing is out of reach
Heart shortening miles
Stars shine the brightest
A moon carrying smiles

Love creating sunshine
Heart happiness glows
Spread on silver linings
Arching along rainbows

Over the clouds above
Heart soars the heights
On galaxy guided paths
Embracing lunar flights

Forever we shall reach
Heart with all it brings
Loved etched devotion
Gifts  upon heartstrings

Hope© 2002


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Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-04 11:51 AM


*sigh* visions of romance and beauty are what you always give as priceless gifts to us, dear Hope. This poem is one such gift and pulls at the heartstrings. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-01-04 12:08 PM


Hope~
Such a lovely *gifting*~

'Forever we shall reach
Heart with all it brings
Loved etched devotion
Gifts upon heartstrings'


I love the delicacy of this~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2002-01-04 08:47 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your heart plucks like a lyre and sings the beauty of love through serenade! (kiss on cheek) May gifts of eternal love forever adorn your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

peppermint35
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4 posted 2002-01-04 09:45 PM


I can only express the same as the others.. it's a lovely song, a lilting melody.

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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5 posted 2002-01-04 09:51 PM


Oh how softly and gently penned...hugs, Nancy.

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2002-01-05 09:47 AM


Beautiful heartstrings! I'm adding this one to my library.

Hugs,
Deb

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