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Alicethruglass
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0 posted 2002-02-04 09:40 PM



How Selfish of Me


In a shattered world,
I have been running away, misloved.
I now fear the silence,
the fragrance of the past,
the dawning of a new love,
as I go through the motions alone.

Do you see me in the empty of words,
in the lonely of these pages,
the masked me, becoming a transparent I?

How selfish of me in these broken moments,
when in shadows, you must endure the endless nights,
your cries in darkness never heard,
the hush of your words so soft.

Inside, I store your angel wings.
I wrap my arms around you in warmth,
touch your hands in understanding,
soothe your ache with care.
Tonight, I write for you a vision of hope,
send you a better tomorrow,
cloak you in velvet softness of words.

In these precious few days shared,
I shall let go of my dreams, to help heal yours.
I shall mourn no more this night,
and shall depart from my memories of pain
that haunt from a once embracing love.
The power of you has captivated me,
my journey coming full circle
from the other side of yesterday.

There is no way out of body, yours or mine.
May my words be a lullabye to you
and may your silent expression bloom in time,
as I give to you, my angel without wings,
the inner light of my admiration.

~A~



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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-02-04 09:57 PM


to write a vision of hope is a wonderful thing......

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



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2 posted 2002-02-04 10:03 PM


Lovely...James
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3 posted 2002-02-04 10:42 PM


Hope is the greatest gift you can give someone who has lost theirs.  Nicely done.

~* Carpe' Diem  *~

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4 posted 2002-02-04 11:12 PM


no you arent selfish..you are maybe too giving of yourself
and would like to be loved in return...

                  ~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

Alicethruglass
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5 posted 2002-02-04 11:22 PM


thank you all..I have met my sister-in-law for the first time...I should be greatful for  the life I  have despite it's problems...
Compared to what she must endure mine are nothing....from a stroke at a young age to being wheelchair bound due mistakes in surgery... to loss of speech..to only be able to whisper...I cannot express the admiration and love I have for her...but  thought I would try in words.

Thank you again.

~A

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-02-06 01:40 AM


Alicethruglass - you have written it well with these words. Haven't read yours before, and would like to read more...

BC

Alicethruglass
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7 posted 2002-02-06 10:44 AM


thank you

~A

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8 posted 2002-02-06 12:18 PM




(big hugggsssss) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words beacon with hope and light and I just know with all of my heart that you will find all your heart desires, for you are never selfish, you are a very loving and compassionate friend to us all who shares such pure love! (kiss onc heek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alice, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Alicethruglass
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9 posted 2002-02-06 05:30 PM


nice  that you notice that in me..thank you Noah *s

~A~

icequeen
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10 posted 2002-02-06 06:08 PM


I bet you haven't a selfish bone in your body   This is truly lovely, and from the heart. You are quite talented. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

Alicethruglass
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11 posted 2002-02-06 09:38 PM


oh..some would beg to differ with you..but I thank you for your confidence in me *s

~A~

BluesSerenade
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12 posted 2002-02-06 09:55 PM


Your words are clearly unselfish ones,
there is a lot of love hidden between the lines.
Nicely penned Alice~

Alicethruglass
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13 posted 2002-02-07 10:21 AM


as there are in many of yours...thank you
Blues..*s

hugs
~A

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