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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-02-04 12:56 PM



If you
Touch softly
me

I shall
caress sweetly
you

then together
we can simply

pause...


~Tier
1/02

© Copyright 2002 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-02-04 01:05 PM


The peacefulness that comes through in just that one word, pause...what I wouldn't give to find it, again.
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-02-04 01:32 PM


you and me makes two
just the right number to dance
among other things

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2002-02-04 02:00 PM


this is so soft and gentle......love it!
peppermint35
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4 posted 2002-02-04 02:35 PM


Ahhh Tier.. sweet balm to a wounded soul

I very much enjoyed

Hugz,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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5 posted 2002-02-04 02:46 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gentle tender words touch all our hearts always! May the beauty of true love whisper to you, sweet friend, we all wish you the greatest happiness always! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tioersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tiersdin
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6 posted 2002-02-04 06:49 PM


Dear Duncan, with a heart like yours, I'm certain that you will find it again... and soon!

Interloper, your words never fail to sway me... *smiles*

Thank you so much, SEA, a wonderful compliment from such a talented writer...

Pepper, You've given a compliment that any poet would love to recieve! Thank you!

Noah, *hugs* *kisses* *smooches* *more hugs* and on and on and on....

*smiles*

~Tier

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7 posted 2002-02-04 09:29 PM


*sigh*
And my heart has held its breath. This is beautiful!

I am many.

RMW
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8 posted 2002-02-05 11:55 AM


Soft, simple, and special. Bob
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The heart of you
9 posted 2002-02-05 12:02 PM


In that moment, I've stopped.  And found what I'd been looking for.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Tiersdin
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10 posted 2002-02-05 12:14 PM


"...and my heart has held it's breath..." what a beautiful line! Thank you, Siofra. *smiles*

Thank you, Bobby. Special words from a special man.

Moonlight Romeo, I think your name says it all... Thank you!

~Tier

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11 posted 2002-02-05 01:27 PM


Awwwwwwww, so short and sweet, you are a doll, love this!

Joanna

Soleil Noir
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12 posted 2002-02-05 01:58 PM



This is very delicate in its touch.  Very well done!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
13 posted 2002-02-05 02:33 PM


Tier~This gave me goosebumps.  Love it!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2002-02-05 10:15 PM


Well said...James
Daniel J D
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15 posted 2002-02-05 11:08 PM


Tier,
Fantastic, loved it.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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