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peppermint35
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0 posted 2002-02-03 02:54 AM


Confusion and pain in equal parts                    
Darkly appealing, chaotic thoughts
No answers come to mind
How long must this last
Can it be wrong to seek an end
Or must one linger on
Caught in this living hell
What karmic wrongs must be repaid
To make this torture last so long
Hope lives eternal they sometimes say
But even hope can die away
In the greyness of that day
When finally nothing's left to say
Be still

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

[This message has been edited by peppermint35 (02-03-2002 02:55 AM).]

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amusemi
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1 posted 2002-02-03 02:56 AM


Yes, it is this way.  
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2002-02-03 07:55 PM


this is full of despair.  Be calm...spring is coming

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



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3 posted 2002-02-03 09:05 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Such tears fill these words, sweet friend, my heart goes to you and I pray with all my heart that hope will come to you and spring will blossom in your heart and always fill you with comfort! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, my heart goes out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lavenia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

J. K. Mitchell
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4 posted 2002-02-03 09:18 PM


It's like your stuck at a point in your life and you certainly can't go backwards but you can't go forward either.
This is good.

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2002-02-03 09:21 PM


enjoyed reading this...

*smiles*

~tier

peppermint35
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6 posted 2002-02-04 03:28 AM


Thank you amusemi, JK and Tiersdin, for your kind comments.. I'm working through it.. this is part of my therapy...

Thanks Kathleen.. I will try hard to remember that..

Thank you too Noah.. I'm trying to find that hope.. seems temporarily misplaced..

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2002-02-05 09:27 AM


Obviously you have a lot to say and we enjoy the reading
I look forward to the turning toward happines for you

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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