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Streen
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0 posted 2002-02-02 05:21 PM



(Fatigued, I need
(to pull myside inward
(and hide myself away
(from inter-actions with
(other people, tho' nice,
(I: made tired by pattern.
(Palled, I melt down
(to the snowy ground
(and timidity makes me
(curl up; I a tired puddle.
(Like a weary flower I
(need to fold, to refreshen.
(Outside world hidden
(by a thin barrier of petals.
(But even though I
(close myself up in
( a cocoon or blossom,
(my core always remains
(open to                                   you.
( and then:   restored,     I    
)

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1 posted 2002-02-02 05:46 PM


Okay, I think I'm awake now, and sort of rested. I think. Interesting.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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2 posted 2002-02-02 06:16 PM




(sigh) Such a wonderfully expressed verse, sweet friend, may you always enfold your petals and hold true the essence of your memories and integrity with loving care! (big huggggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Streen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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