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J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

0 posted 2002-01-27 08:46 PM

Their eyes connect from across the room
But quickly they look away
The love was forbidden
She felt his presence near her
She wanted to reach for his hand but did not
Because the love was forbidden
Her smile warmed his heart
Her laughter was his sweet melody
He longed to reach for her
But the love was forbidden
They were so close
Yet so far away
From happiness, from completeness
Yet the love was forbidden
Just for a moment she wanted to break the laws
And fall into him
Was such a thing wrong?
Why was the love forbidden?
The longing never stopped
But still he went to another
The love would always be forbidden
And with a heavy heart
She did the same
Before the forbidden love turned bitter

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-01-27 08:52 PM

J.K,
you pen the ideas of forbidden love very well.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-01-27 08:55 PM

J.K. Very well written and interesting piece on forbidden love..may we see more please?

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-27 09:08 PM

Very nice JK, kind of sad, as I am feeling sorry that it was forbidden and they could not meet. nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

CD
Member

since 2001-01-27

Posts 101

4 posted 2002-01-27 09:16 PM

Well written

Sad but often true.

CD

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2002-01-27 09:19 PM

This is an incredible poem. I don't think I've read you before, I really enjoy your style of writing.
At this moment I am working on a poem, which begins very much the same. Yet ends exactly opposite. And that made me like this all the more. They could almost be mismatched bookends.

jennirey
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

6 posted 2002-01-27 09:40 PM

How very sad. But wonderously penned

Thank you for sharing

Jen

Treasure every moment that you have!
Yesterday is history.
Tomorrow is mystery.
Today is a gift.
That's why it's called the present!!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-01-27 09:47 PM

this was well written about forbidden love!
I don't think anyone should forbid two lovers to be together, it just might make them rebellious! Like Romeo and Juliet

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2002-01-27 09:54 PM

J K,

Wait, wait, wait! WHY was the love forbidden? Do I hear a sequel coming?

Nice write and enjoyed!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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