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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-01-03 01:00 PM


I can't remember when I was three
but I remember how you'd torture me!
You'd sit on me and tickle my feet
I didn't like it~but you thought it was neat.
Oh now some of those things we did as teens!
Growing up, we shared our dreams.

Sticking together, through thick and thin
we lost battles, but some we did win!
Aged with maturity, together we've grown
but lucky us! our age is not shown! *w*
Take a trip back into our past
those are memories, made to last.

You'll be my sister until the end~~
but more than that, you are my friend.


Happy Birthday my ten day twin! *wink*
(explanation: we are the same age for just ten days.)


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-03-2002 01:28 PM).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-03 01:09 PM


Okay the ten day thing threw me but other than that this is a wonderful sisterly poem and I love it. It shows how very close you are. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2002-01-03 01:10 PM


yes isnt it funny Donna how you cant stand each other when small
and grow up to be best freinds ha...my sis and i love talking
about silly little things we use to do to each other ha..
even though she was younger she could fit into my clothes
so sometimes she would wear to school what i had planned to wear that day..
of course she made sure she was gone before i woke up

                            ~Vic


"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            

[This message has been edited by Victoria (01-03-2002 01:12 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-01-03 01:13 PM


Until she turned 14, I wasn't altogether sure my baby sister was entirely human. LOL But almost overnight she went from perpetual nemesis to best friend... we literally can NOT go to sleep mad at each other. *G*

It sounds as though you share my luck... this is great! *S*

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4 posted 2002-01-03 01:35 PM



A wonderful write of sisterhood.
We may argue, fight and scream
at each other now and then, but
always, always, they remain
best friends...

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5 posted 2002-01-03 01:42 PM


Touching tribute.
Larry C
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6 posted 2002-01-03 02:12 PM


Donna,
Life doesn't get better then that! Great tribute. You don't need a brother, do you?

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7 posted 2002-01-03 08:49 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know your loving sister will love this so very much! (sigh) May you be sisters foreve rembraced in the happiness of true love and friendship! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so mcuh, sweet friend, we all wish your sister the happiest birthday! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-01-03 08:55 PM


This is so great. I've missed you Somy~ I have two sisters who I adore..earlier we didn't think we did..but it was all in sibling bonding. I understand this well.
Big Hugs!!

Sincerely,
Regina

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9 posted 2002-01-03 11:38 PM


this makes me want a sister, I have two brothers I would never exchange, for all the tea in china....loving write....


Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2002-01-04 12:59 PM


thanks Startime, how true those words are.  *s*

Victoria, lmao!  I know those kind of things.

Suthern, I sure do share your luck!  Thanks hon.

SN, yes........always friends.

Interloper..THANKS  

Larry, no it sure doesn't get better!  My sister thought this was
cute.  As a matter of fact I have two sisters ...
no brothers!   Can I call you big brother?

Noah, yes she did like it.  Thanks for stoppin in.

somy~ I have missed you too!  Sisters are great,
I'm proud to call you sis.  *s*

Lauren, I have no brothers, but tell ya hon,
in my heart you will always be like a sister
to me.  You are too good to me sweetie.  Hugs.


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-04-2002 01:00 PM).]

Larry C
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11 posted 2002-01-09 12:29 PM


Donna,
You bet...cause I never had a sister and I have two brothers. Seems we got short changed just a little, he?

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