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Hey Coppah
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Hey Coppah |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Hey Coppah Makin' a diff'rence Why' d you let me speed passed To 85? Hey Coppah Policin' my life Stop me unexpected Running the light Hey Coppah Left you behind Watch me go down here Exit and die |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Hey, wayoutwalt, not sure where this is going, but I can see it in a couple of ways. One is running from the cops and loosing. And then I can think of some other things. Oh well, it is a good "thinker" anyway I look at it. ME |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Yes, I agree with Mother Earth, I believe this can be expressed on so many different levels, either a demand for privacy or a struggle for inner-peace or something along those lines! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are always so fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ugh, past to 85. You get a ticket tonight? Cor |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehhe no ticket yuh as the first two posters said look deeper yuh |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
wayoutwalt, You can run but you can't hide. Lot's of possibilities here. And tons of stories to tell. So don't hold back.  |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
Looks like there are a coppah different meanings here. The ending is cool. Especially if it means die as in, your old self died and you are born again. Short but ku [This message has been edited by cruz (01-26-2002 12:04 AM).] |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very thought provoking!I like it. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Walt, on the highway of life I prefer the ticket to the alternative. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Walt - You'd best be obeying the speed limits... and btw - tell that coppah there's somebody around here impersonating you... |
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