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Open Poetry #18
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poeticdreamer
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since 2002-01-17
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0 posted 2002-01-24 11:21 PM

My life gently exploded
In showers of sparkling dreams
Passion lit this mind
Unlike any dying desire

Love caressed my thoughts
Stroking ego beyond ecstasy
Delicate powerful hands touching
Willingly drowned in nirvana
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doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
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1 posted 2002-01-24 11:25 PM

"willingly drowning in nirvana"

ahhhhhhh..... now THAT'S the way it's supposed to be.....
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2002-01-24 11:35 PM

*sigh* "love caressed my thoughts" now that is a line filled with the most wonderful feelings of love and passion....Stunning...I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
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