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Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-24 12:59 PM

Naked skies
on oceans blue
breathlessly shining love.
Brilliant sapphire,
my desire mirrored
through your hypnotic eyes
of misty gray.
Long strokes of yearning
welling up, spouting forth
into the clear well-springs
of love-light shining.
You slip through my hands
a pure watered joy
to touch, to drink in.

How is it my voice
is so distant, so faint,
that you do not hear
my throbbing words
of wanting, my anguished
cries of soul's dispersing.

Naked skies
on oceans blue
always radiating love,
reflecting desire.
I am the brilliant
sapphire star
that you cannot see
and you do not hear.
Yet my love waits
patiently
on eternal wings,
nearer to your heart
than you can ever imagine.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-01-24 08:14 AM

i sense the yearning in this piece Ivy,,how beautiful it is.floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-01-24 10:23 AM

Ivy Rose~

I am the brilliant
sapphire star
that you cannot see"

I am in awe of this line....BEAUTIFUL

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-24 05:52 PM

a topic I love to think and write about blue!
Lovely, Ivy

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

4 posted 2002-01-24 05:56 PM

Ivy; This is truly an exquisitly beautiful poem of unrequited love. Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-24 06:03 PM

(sigh) Such a beautiful poem of loves yearning, sweet friend, may true love come to your heart and may the sapphire star of his heart shine to you and guide you always with true loves bliss! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-01-24 07:55 PM

"I am the brilliant
sapphire star
that you cannot see
and you do not hear."
Perhaps the intended receiver will be receiving this message of love sooner than you imagined. Very well done, poetess.

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