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Bonnie Brae
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Bonnie Brae |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is a re-post dedicated to my sweet Joanna) Bonnie Brae By: Noah Eaton 2/16/01 Blue spruce cloverleafs tatter before purple mountain majesties Boxelders rise and shine at winters dusk on hillocky milky foothills Here we would lay on bonnie brae, letting the snowflakes kiss our faces We’d rest our heads side by side, sweet words blanketed us as Mother Nature yawned her williwaw in her sleep Side by side would we lay, making snow angels on the snow-capped meadow The warmth of your hand keeping me warm, as we wait for the sunlight to seep through the clouds I held you in my arms as we stepped back inside as the day ended and the nights got colder Dreaming of you by and by, as winters dusk passed us by On bonnie brae, I embowel all my pain deep into my pocket and clear my head with you Here I sing my serenade to you, rhythm follows with the seasons From the ossuary of late-blooming buds, springs dawn reincarnates petrified roots Tarradiddle perennials rise forth this season in chicanery, wizards of the earth awakening from hibernation Sunlight beacons forth the bonnie brae, sitting with you on this jade vale We as one enkindle within the fresh hollyhock breath of annual beginning And this is where I loved you, I picked a daisy for you, my darling Our love came in with the sunlight, I knew that when I first saw the lightness in your face I would kiss you on the soft meadow grass Rolling with you down the small hillsides under the azure skies On bonnie brae, I learned not to feel shy, when I first met you Here I sing my serenade to you, rhythm follows with the seasons Sun overcomes day in the noon of the summer, sultry days playing with thunderstorms orchestra Butterscotch rain keeping the soil healthy, leaves swaying in the mandate of enlightenment I sat with you out in the soft drizzle on bonnie brae, kissing your moist lips kissed by the rain, feeling your long wetted hair Smoothly dragging my hand down, feeling the softness, as I walked away with you as the rain began to fall harder I would look out the window with you, my arm around your shoulders Watching the hail fall, heavens pearls of holy matrimony dropped in rejoice of our truly found love The heart of the setting sun pierced with a bolt of lightning, natures cupid speaking A rainbow explodes back again, a mirror reflection of his message silencing to a sigh On bonnie brae, I touched your heart, just as you touched mine Here I sing my serenade to you, rhythm follows with the seasons As the season goes by, falls midnight undertows backwards across the atmosphere Aspen ridges and crabapple gulches kissed in moonlight of Picasso Stars substitute the sunlight over bonnie brae, where far from a telescopic lens, I gazed up at the stars with you at my side Your head tucked safe under my arm around your shoulder, swearing you found your place within the seven sisters We’d both look at this star, lighting the sky like no other, and we’d see it twinkle in each others eyes Every wink your eyes blink, just as you noticed the same with me, accepting this gift together with hands held The star twinkled between our faces as our lips embraced in the starlight kiss, present of eternity delivered We happily said together we’d be together forever the rest of our lives, through every season that follows, as I held you close On bonnie brae, we found we were truly meant for each other Here I sing my serenade to you, rhythm follows with the seasons Your love flows in me with every season, my love Never will I miss a single breath of fresh air, never will I miss a sunrise or sunset In times cabriolet, love will ride us on through life come joy And in your eyes, I will always see…bonnie brae… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-23-2002 03:10 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh my Noah, this is so so lovely, I am glad you reposted it as I have not read it before, your words are so expressive. Floria Floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh Noah dear your poems make me cry..especially this one..butterscotch rain..i love that hon..hugss  ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
so good to see you happy and sooooo in love, may love always shines upon your path. And your love for Joanna shines in every line. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, A very good write, Enjoyed |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Just wanted to tell you i read it again..i loved it noah..simply gorgeous..  ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
she will love this, Noah, just love it. It is a feast for the senses. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Noah, in the world of cynicism, it's nice to know that Love and her beauty still lives! Lovely, lovely images~! *S* Atov |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sweet Noah~ time is on your side....lovely words here...  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah Your lovely Joanna must be a very special lady and I'm sure she loved reading this beautiful dedication. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Noah, this is exceptional work here! I love reading your romantic poetry! Such a romantic heart in a man is a woman's dream! Beautiful writing, yet again! Love, Bonnie |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A wonderful loving gift, Noah. She is so very lucky to have such a wonderful poetic jewel, as you in love with her. God bless you both. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah..very loving and heart felt..she will love it! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah, you are a true romantic...I know she will love this... |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Noah, This is absolutely beautiful! The feelings so strong touched my heart I know it will touch hers! great job!  Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Beautiful dedication Noah....simply beautiful!!! |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Noah, This piece is so heartfelt and lovely. Every word is just a beat of your heart as it pours out its feelings for your lucky lady. It's nice to see such romantic spirit and the beauty of love alive and well. ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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