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strbbux
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0 posted 2002-01-20 02:00 PM



Creator Of All

The beauty of vivid lavender streaks,
That dance across the cerulean sky,
With fluffy cotton candy clouds,
Floating to nowhere.

Majestic trees standing tall,
With jewel colored leaves,
Dancing to the ground,
Landing on blades of shimmering grass.
Rocks imbedded with colors of the earth.

Butterflies take rest on sweet fragrant flowers,
Their petals gently open to the sky,
As if with open arms they welcome all.
Bees partake of nectar in the stamens.
Food of gold, sweet nourishment.

Raindrops gently streaming down from heaven,
Softly landing on this ethereal scene,
Touching the cheeks of petals as if a kiss,
Rolling off a rock, leaving a trail of luminous wetness.

Who else could create such wondrous art,
But The Creator of all.

Floria


© Copyright 2002 Floria Kelderhouse - All Rights Reserved
Mac Attack
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1 posted 2002-01-20 02:09 PM


What a gentle, peace filled piece.  Glad I popped in for a peek!


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2 posted 2002-01-20 02:11 PM


This poem is very pleasing to the mind's eye, and very true....God creates such beautiful artwork. Nicely done!

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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3 posted 2002-01-20 02:11 PM


Floria,  you paint the most pleasing and
visually serene images with your words...
Beautiful..

strbbux
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4 posted 2002-01-20 02:16 PM


Thank you Mac. Nature is my love. floria
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5 posted 2002-01-20 02:16 PM


Thank you kindly Elizabeth. floria
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6 posted 2002-01-20 02:17 PM


Thank you kindly Magnus, makes me feel good to hear that. floria
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7 posted 2002-01-20 02:18 PM


Yes he's the Father of all creativity...james
strbbux
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8 posted 2002-01-20 02:20 PM


Thank you James, and what beauty He creates indeed, floria
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9 posted 2002-01-20 02:27 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, God is the most talented artist of all and paints life for us all! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is a true masterpiece! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Floria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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10 posted 2002-01-20 02:58 PM


who else indeed. Thank you Floria, for a lovely poem.

Kathleen--(Kay)
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11 posted 2002-01-20 03:12 PM


Beautifully written, floria.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Morcastlin
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12 posted 2002-01-20 04:08 PM


This is a wonderful tribute to God and his creation! Excellent writing! I really enjoyed this!

Love,
Bonnie

strbbux
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13 posted 2002-01-20 04:12 PM


Thank you so very much Noah for always reading and responding. floria
strbbux
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14 posted 2002-01-20 04:13 PM


Irish Rose thank you for your kind reply. floria
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15 posted 2002-01-20 04:14 PM


Thank you Newell. much, floria
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16 posted 2002-01-20 04:14 PM


Thank you Bonnie so much, floria
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17 posted 2002-01-20 04:42 PM


Absolutely gorgeous!  I love this!

Traci

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Eph. 2:8-9

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18 posted 2002-01-20 04:45 PM


Floria, this is heavenly poetry!
Love it...just love it!
~warm hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

strbbux
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19 posted 2002-01-20 05:44 PM


Thank you very much Traci. floria
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20 posted 2002-01-20 05:44 PM


Thank you Nancy very much. floria
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