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Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion

0 posted 2002-01-02 10:33 PM


Formerly, this was Our Story Ever Unfolding.
I'm posting it for someone special. **Heart Hugs**, you!

It was late New Years Eve
and you topped my heart with a smile
by tipping the hat of your friendship.
We danced and lingered for hours
just drifting in mischief and disbelief.
We, the drink of choice
for hungry eyes and lonely hearts
broke through the haze of boredom
and cornered ourselves a bit of hope.
So smiling followed where we went
as we spiced the night
with friends as strangers.
We didn't know fate
had made our resolutions for us.
Your voice filled my head
and I was lost in the step
of the twirl you made me dizzy with
as you spun the threads of your heart
around the comfort of my dreaming soul.
Since then I have searched for worthy words
and failed to find that single breath
to say how much I thank you for taking my hand.
It was late New Years Eve
and you tipped your hat
to the top of my dreams
secluding me in your arms
as midnight seized our kiss in its folding embrace.

I am many.

© Copyright 2002 Siofra - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2002-01-02 10:49 PM


there's nothing like New Year's. . .

wonderfully done Siofra. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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2 posted 2002-01-02 11:17 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, I always feel so happy deep inside when I read of people falling in love! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo beautiful, it's so magical what time can give our hearts! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Siofra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Robert A
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3 posted 2002-01-03 01:40 PM


I've had a few eves like this, only don't remember them in the morning!


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