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Kitty**
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0 posted 2002-01-02 10:18 PM


I witnessed, a forever, in a moment....
I witnessed, a dream come true.
I am witnessing, a nightmare never ending,
when I spoke the words, *I love you* !

I witnessed, a small glimpse of heaven.
I witnessed, the manliness of you.
I am witnessing, a void never filling,
I am witnessing the lost of you.


If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

[This message has been edited by Kitty** (01-02-2002 10:21 PM).]

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Jamie
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1 posted 2002-01-02 10:21 PM


May you also witness the rejuvenation of yourself. Nice poem.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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2 posted 2002-01-02 10:33 PM




(smiles) And may your loving heart experience the return of true love to your heart and bliss to last forever! (kiss on cheek) So sad but lovely, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kitty, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

jwesley
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3 posted 2002-01-02 10:38 PM


Great expression here...think Jamie hit it on the toe, though...I agree.

jwesley

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