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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i wanted merely to see you smile-- to see the light of your smile in your eyes and to find some portal there to the deeper soul of you i wanted just to hear your voice your laughter each sigh in the air that would encircle us i wanted to experience each expression of your face... i wanted just to be with you for a moment-- or a few hours to know who you are... i wanted only to touch your hand in passing -dgvarner 12-30-01 ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the magic of a smile is always contagious and spreads joy to others! (kiss on cheek) Every time I look at your smile in your picture, you always make me smile just as your words do! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee darling girl this is outstanding I love the flow of this the way if moves and spreads just like a smile warming a face then the whole person. You look delightful darling girl I love the piccy. Give my love to the baby who's not a baby anymore, but still delicious. I did tell you this was splendiferous didn't I? Well it is darling girl it is. Another Dee triumph.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
DG, Beautiful! Wonderful! I really enjoyed reading this! so many times just to have a tiny bit of that kind of love and happiness is enough...you put it so well  hugs Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my, how I love this! The yearning in the words.....and the way they spill gently down the page....wonderful! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Substantial...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my this sounds so simple, just for the moment to realize the trangible touch. Enjoyed your expression and the yearning. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Ohhhhhhhh .... I love this~  *Hugs* sweet poetess~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Jeffrey E. Osborne Member
since 2001-11-01
Posts 160out there |
OMG, you posted this! I'm blushing red and feeling guilty all at the same time! (lol) This poem is so sweet and the words beautifully combine yearning with tender emotions. OK, now I really feel silly for not having met you in person when I had the chance D'oh! Well done! - Jeff "people say I should learn some self-control, but I just want to exorcise my soul" |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
gale, don't scream at me but when i read this the first time, i took it to mean a demanding, perhaps possessive personna who is filled with remorse when his/her lover decides enough is enough and walks out of his/her life... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks NOAH..smiles ARE contagious..! BUBBLES! so good to see you gracing my poetry again...! thanks for stopping by.. CINDI..a tiny bit of knowing a tiny bit of something tangible...! lol thanks.. NANCY..thank you for such a nice reply! JAMESMICHAEL..thank you! BLUES...thank you much! thank you MISS MARGIE... glad you enjoyed..JEFF...dummy...  KAILE...my friend..how did you read me soooo wrong...! lol if i had you in front of me, i'd whip you silly....lol nah..thats ok..sometimes it happens..so did it suck? lol hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! This one invokes such a feeling in me, goes right to my core. Excellent work my friend, take care! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
EAGLE..thank you my friend..i'm glad you enjoyed it.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! My eyes just flew down the page. Just a wonderful write promising many others for me to enjoy Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
DG...YES...this is the way to say what you want...I like how you have done it... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
INTERLOPER..wow..thanks! plenty of them already out there to read.. MAGNUS..thanks! glad you enjoyed.. hugs, g (aw man...sorry bout the bump up...fallen slipped up on me...  )~dgvarner/fallen rain~ so many things i want to say to him..but i just placed a rose on his grave, and talked to the wind... -tim mcgraw [This message has been edited by fallen rain (01-04-2002 07:09 PM).] |
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