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Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-01-19 02:34 PM

Castles Over The Rainbow (A Villanelle)
By: Noah Eaton
1/19/02

Here in these castles over the rainbow
Fevered in lavender cupid showers
Where lovers embrace in meadows of gold

Listen as the alabaster bells toll
High upon the lovely lady's tower
Here in these castles over the rainbow

In this lush garden you enlighten my soul
Within your heather I will embower
Where lovers embrace in meadows of gold

You wear my dreams and hopes as your hairbows
You sacrifice your tears for fresh flowers
Here in these castles over the rainbow

Suckling your lips honey, holding you close
Migrating heavens, building joys power
Where lovers embrace in meadows of gold

Caressing your loins in the rosewood rain
Under tangerine skies that slowly wane
Where lovers embrace in meadows of gold
Here in these castles over the rainbow

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-19-2002 02:34 PM).]

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2002-01-19 02:39 PM

Sweet Noah, Oh, you know what? I think this is my favourite of all that you have written and is going into my library. Just wonderful. hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-01-19 02:43 PM

You never disappoint Noah.This is truly wondeful. castles, I love castles and over the rainbow yet. i can just hear Judy singing now. floria

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-19 03:56 PM

Thank you all so much for your beautiful replies! I love you all! (smiles)

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-19-2002 04:01 PM).]

dawn to dusk
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since 2001-12-09

Posts 68
Colorado

4 posted 2002-01-19 03:57 PM

This is beautiful!!! Very romantic. I love it! Good work.

Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2002-01-19 04:20 PM

In this lush garden you enlighten my soul
Within your heather I will embower
Where lovers embrace in meadows of gold

What a pretty picture you write Noah.
The splendor was breathtaking.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

6 posted 2002-01-19 04:25 PM

hehehe i like that last part the best!!! WILL ANYONE CARESS MY LOINS???

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

7 posted 2002-01-19 04:53 PM

Masterfully written, sweet Noah.

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-01-19 05:31 PM

Enjoyed this Noah...James

catalinamoon

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Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-01-19 06:29 PM

Agreeing with everyone else..this is lovely. And very well done.
Sandra

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

10 posted 2002-01-25 12:57 PM

"You wear my dreams and hopes as your hairbows
You sacrifice your tears for fresh flowers
Here in these castles over the rainbow"

oh my...this is incredible! I love the way you express your thoughts...I love it.
This is a hard form to write in, you did it excellently! Teach me!!

Joanna

His Poet
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since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

11 posted 2002-01-25 03:17 PM

Noah, a true poet of love you are as well as a lover of poetry. You combine the two so well. Lovely expressions that paint beautiful pictures. Cheryl

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

12 posted 2002-01-25 04:01 PM

a wonderful Villanelle, Noah, very nice

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2002-01-25 04:59 PM

Beautiful~

~~
Lauren~

Thoughts slide out
of hiding and cling
to anything I put
in front of them.
Words bead up
like dew and in
a moment,
will be accessible.

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-25-2002 05:00 PM).]

DarkAngelChelle
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 87
Kansas

14 posted 2002-01-25 05:05 PM

Noah,

This is so lovely! You always have such a way with words - so eloquent, and flowing, and romantic ... my mind is always flooded with vivid images whenever I read your work. Each line just seems to uplift my heart. Wonderful.

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

15 posted 2002-01-25 05:28 PM

Wow Noah!
great images in this rainbow write.
write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

DayDreamer99
Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 72

16 posted 2002-01-25 05:37 PM

awww *hugs* i wanna live there!! wanna come with me? hehe I love this poem...I love all your poems...*muah* byes!
Tifferz

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