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thepoeticplumber
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since 2001-05-15
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0 posted 2002-01-02 09:16 PM


So many times we look and see
An eye of sadness, openly

We have much trouble, planet earth
So many strive, to take and hurt

A senseless waste and use of time
To harbor greed, to nurture crime

Goodness, gracious, save your soul
To rot in hell, is this your goal?

Ask God for help, pray hard to see
That good inside, must be set free

The day you die is not a fact
Until you cannot breathe or act

Each day of life should find some way
To love mankind, not go astray

It's such a simple point of view
Each eye of sadness, so needs you


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Marsha
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1 posted 2002-01-02 09:21 PM


Roger this is absolutely first class.

Absolutely Fabulous

What can I say except this is outstanding

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-02 09:40 PM




(smiles) Yes, yes, each day will find its way, and He will always be here to answer our tears to our hearts content! (big hugggsssss) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you soi very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2002-01-02 11:11 PM


Yes yes yes, it's easy to lose sight of what truly matters most.  Loved your message, the sentiment, and your inspiring and enlightening words.
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2002-01-02 11:34 PM


Hello Roger
I always enjoy reading your work and this one carries such an important message.
Take care my friend........Sue

Suetang

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