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painly-
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since 2002-01-18
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0 posted 2002-01-19 02:04 PM



sorry for my prior thread that involved profanity, it is seldom i have any in, i believe true emotion can be captured without weakened four letter words.


Ignorance is love

My head rest upon her bony shoulder
Her shoulder of curiosity and misunderstood wrongs

I rest my head on my baby
She looks at me and smiles, I see happiness crunching through

But why is this still sour? Why does it hurt me to smile back
Why have you told me all this…stuff?

I don’t appreciate your past
And highly doubt your untold present

I want to, I want to so bad
But I just cant

Painly


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EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2002-01-19 02:10 PM


yes.. perhaps she feels the same way.. and wonders why she feels cautious and nervous.. maybe what you feel is the beginnings of true love . ?
Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-01-19 02:25 PM



This goes very well to showing one why love should not be ignorant.  We always believe that we can help someone through their lives; and that is not always so.  Listen to the red flags, if they are whipping in the wind...

painly-
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3 posted 2002-01-19 03:32 PM


wow you guys really made me think

painly

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