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painly-
Junior Member

since 2002-01-18

Posts 10

0 posted 2002-01-18 10:36 PM

Sore arms
Why did you have to choose him?
Oh I sobbed from day two
Why couldn’t you take wait for “love”
In essence I cringed with the moon
He hurts for time lacks as with

Those chemicals stair
So easy, why so [edited] easy!!
Such understatement to understand

I don’t love you
Mine is not a thing to achieve!!

I held the candle up, held!!!!!!!!!!
Arms weak,
Ignorant passion for my pains strong

I want you to loose me….

Painly

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-19-2002 07:06 AM).]

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2002-01-18 10:48 PM

I like this, I really like this, you had me feeling the raw pain and emotion in it. A big welcome to you here on the blue pages.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-01-19 01:32 AM

Welcome to Passions. What an emotional, painful write.

painly-
Junior Member

since 2002-01-18

Posts 10

3 posted 2002-01-19 05:06 AM

thanks guys, this board looks awsome with some beautiful words flowing from it, i hope to read alot and comment on alot of stuff in the near future. Thank you very much for you responses.

yours truly

painly

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2002-01-20 09:24 AM

Hi Painly,

Welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay and enjoyed the reading look forward to more of your work.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-01-20 09:32 AM

I hope you come to find many more "lovely words" here at Passions, for we are chock full of them! Welcome! Please check your e-mail for a Special Greeting...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

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