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nikhilparekh
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0 posted 2002-01-18 01:35 PM


If I was a minuscule brick looking as inconspicuous as a mosquito;
sandwiched
between several of my kind,
He was the entire building; towering domineeringly over the crowded and
bustling street.
If I were a diminutive stalk of grass sprouting from the soil; buckling
down
with paramount ease under feeble draughts of wind,
He was the entire space of fecund land; sprawling over thousands of
kilometers.

If I were an obscure wave rising in the sea; falling intermittently with
the
positioning of the enchanting moon,
He was the entire ocean; which was incongruously colossal in size;
incorporating a fleet of animate organisms in its belly.

If I were a small mound of clay lying dilapidated beside the hill; with
irregular strands of thread camouflaging my persona,
He was the gigantic mountain; with profoundly accentuated summits;
standing
formidably against the most tenacious of storm.

If I were an ephemeral ray of light falling on the earth; miserably
unable to
make the slightest of indentation in illuminating the atmosphere,
He was the magnanimous sun brilliantly scintillating in the sky;
radiating his
omnipotent essence far and wide.

If I were a disdainful cockroach loitering indolently around the
lavatory
seat; with sporadic incidences of devouring small ants,
He was the entire jungle; impregnated with ferocious beasts; breeding
the
primordial dinosaur thundering his way through the mangled green.

If I were a crisp note of currency; incessantly relishing my prospects
of
spending exorbitantly,
He was the entire money which floated in this world; the conglomerate
of
opulent banks overflowing with cash.

If I were a contemporary computer; having a battalion of intricate
chips in my
brain,
He was the stupendous power; governing my mind as well as adroitly
maneuvering
the world.

If I were an mystical astrologer; scientifically predicting the fortune
of
some of my clients,
He was the one who sculptured the life of millions existing; impeccably
wrote
my destiny; without a trace of blemish.

If I were a globule of water lying solitary on the forlorn street;
being
ruthlessly kicked by passing pedestrians,
He was the entire expanse of vast sky; which pelted thunderously
blissful
droplets of rain.

He was the one who had procreated the first human; from which later
were
spawned millions inhabiting this globe; the very reason that I was here
breathing fresh air in my lungs today,
Let me tell you I was an ordinary man residing amongst infinite numbers
like
myself; while he was the omniscient creator.

NIKHIL PAREKH, (C)2001 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

http://www.Kingfisherbooks.com/Bookshop-1.htm
(IN THE LAP OF MY MOTHER, MY FIRST COLLECTION OF POEMS)

© Copyright 2002 nikhilparekh - All Rights Reserved
Morcastlin
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1 posted 2002-01-18 01:51 PM


Now that's what I call putting it into perspective!!! This is an excellent read! Bravo!
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2 posted 2002-01-18 02:40 PM


Wow, This is marvelous. What a great description of our awesome God! You did a beautiful job of comparisons. Now I remember I'm only a speck of dust. Thanks for the reminder. Cheryl
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3 posted 2002-01-18 02:45 PM




Yep yep yep, not a shadow of a doubt, He is our omniscient creator, and the giver of Light and Love! (big huggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, this is a fabulous perspective of true beauty! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nikhil, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-01-19 12:52 PM


Interesting...James
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