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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-01-18 01:05 AM


Mushy’s Birthday
By Larry Chadwick

When writing a poetic verse,
It’s hard to not get Mushy.
But for that romantic stuff,
It’s pretty easy to get gushy.

I know a girl who is so cute,
She lives across the sea.
Spunkiest thing I’ve ever known,
And funny as can be.

A little birdie spoke to me,
Using bright pink words.
It seems she has a birthday,
Reducing her age by thirds.

That would make her twenty-one,
According to her new math.
And I am sure she’s right,
Although it makes me laugh.

So if she’s here on this fine day,
Instead of cutting cake with her knife.
Please, be sure to wish her well.
But shouldn’t she get a life?




© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-01-18 02:01 AM


Larry darling boy this is just sooooooooo wonderful. I am never disappointed by the artistry and wonder you craft into your poems and this is utterly utterly fabulous. You’ve wrtten me a poem that is absolutely fabulous ONE of your utter best and it is as wonderful as you are because YOU are indeed truly wonderful

You know that this is utterly fabulous don’t you, the flow is just perfect
And you know that I love it right? This goes straight into my library thank you thank you thank you darling boy

Truly sensational writing,


Bravi Bravi Bravissimi


Thank you for this wonderful poem it’s utterly utterly fabulous I can’t tell you how much I love this

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Larry C
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2 posted 2002-01-18 02:05 AM


Mushy,
I'm so glad you found it first, as it was special for you! Happy Birthday.

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3 posted 2002-01-18 03:18 AM


Aw, Larry C you are sooo sweet! And I like your mushy Mushy poetry as mush as your funny stuff.
Kethry
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4 posted 2002-01-18 05:46 AM


Larry now don't you get Mushy on me!
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Tracey
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5 posted 2002-01-18 07:16 AM


Happy birthday Marsha. And I like that idea of reducing your birthday by thirds. Think I'll try that one.
What a cute poem Larry.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

dgvarner
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6 posted 2002-01-18 08:01 AM


ROFL!  this is too cute for our silly bubbly girl marsha...   

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MISS BUBBLES!  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

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7 posted 2002-01-18 06:43 PM


Kacy,
Ahhh shucks... Thanks.

Keth,
And your preference would be... (hoping)

Hey Tracey,
Thanks...great to see you hanging around!

g,
Thanks...so glad you enjoyed!

Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-01-18 09:17 PM


Happy birthday to you, Marsha
From old Silver Springs
Our birds, alligators and turtles
Wish you best of all things.

All hope that your day, Marsha
Is happy with fun
And all through your new year
You'll have nothing but sun.

Happy birthday, Marsha.

Silver Streak.

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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9 posted 2002-01-18 09:38 PM




YAY!!! Another beautiful poem for our sweet loving Mushy, sweet friend, she is such a beautiful delight to us all! (big huggssssss) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! HAPPY BIRTHDAY MARSHA!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


Bill Charles
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10 posted 2002-01-18 10:03 PM


Larry - just mahvalous, for our mushy friend Mushy, from across the pond...

BC

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11 posted 2002-01-18 10:14 PM


Happy Birthday sweetie! Hope it was a good birthday


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12 posted 2002-01-18 10:28 PM


Hey, Larry! Let's cut her open and count her rings!!
Larry C
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13 posted 2002-01-19 12:36 PM


Silver Streak,
Nice to meet you. I know Marsha loves poetry about her and will enjoy this one.

Noah,
Thanks...how old do you think she is?

Bill,
Why...thank you kind sir.

Joanna,
ditto that.

Balladeer,
Maybe we could just stick her with a fork. Hmmmm!

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