The Coldest Heart ... (repost)

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Parker
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since 2000-01-06

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0 posted 2002-01-17 11:18 PM

The Coldest Heart (a sonnet)

Is it the bitter cold or winter wind?
That steals the heat from I and loves hot flame.
This heart to be the victim of my sins;
Before I found the light of kinder ways.
Every warmth that touches these saddened eyes,
Is welcomed with a sweet and gentle kiss.
Too soon to cloud and freeze like winters sky;
Now left are memories of moment's bliss.
But you, the question of confusing dreams,
Whose words may crack my cold and frozen night?
You'll find a way to me through sewn seams,
If sprinkled love within confetti white.
So come to me and heat this lovers dark,
I know your touch will thaw the coldest heart.

James Parker Haley (c) Dec 30, 2000

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2002-01-17 11:29 PM

Wow, this sonnet could thaw any frozen heart. Beautiful!

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2002-01-17 11:35 PM

You could thaw a million hearts with this.Nicely done.
Peaches

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2002-01-17 11:51 PM

James... I do like this sonnet. It is a wonderful read.
alan

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2002-01-18 12:34 PM

You? Cold? Never!

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2002-01-18 08:10 AM

But you, the question of confusing dreams,
Whose words may crack my cold and frozen night?
You'll find a way to me through sewn seams,
If sprinkled love within confetti white.
So come to me and heat this lovers dark,
I know your touch will thaw the coldest heart.
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so james parker...d'ya think anyone will notice the irony of the reposts.....

nah.....lol

you know how these speak to me..

i could go live in open #10....

hugs, g /pip/Forum43/HTML/002626.html

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

[he] comes to me when i'm feelin' down..inspires me without a sound..[he] touches me... -b joel

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (01-18-2002 08:21 AM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-01-18 09:00 AM

Parker, I was freezing when I awoke this morning....but, you turned the heat up really fast! Good write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

7 posted 2002-01-18 01:13 PM

Ok, I admit it, I am a bad friend because...( I can't remember this one for the life of me).

But if it makes you(and me) feel any better, Sonnets are indeed one of your strongest talents.

Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-01-18 02:09 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love it, these words are destined to melt any woman's heart, this is sooooooo beautiful! (big hugggsssss) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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