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Loneheart
Member

since 1999-09-13

Posts 92
Eastern US

0 posted 2002-01-17 11:12 PM

A soft wind blows,
The tears of time fall
As dawn’s soft light awakens me
A gentle soul has become my destiny

Long in my heart buried and hid
Lie memories of love not yet dead
Within my heart thy passion I still feel
It has undraped my soul it's secrets revealed.
Were you only a dream
Or can it be
You were a gift from life’s garden
Only for me.
In the corners of my mind where you are light,

Dreamer of dreams I bid thee goodnight.

If ones cup should be filled til it runneth over
and there be no vessel to catch the precious
contents there of then it will be lost.
Lonehear

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-01-17 11:22 PM

Loneheart~This is beautiful....I love it!!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-01-17 11:26 PM

Loneheart, it's nice to meet you. This is quite beautiful, especially this:

"Within my heart thy passion I still feel
It has undraped my soul it's secrets revealed"

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

3 posted 2002-01-17 11:32 PM

And I too,
shall bid thee "Goodnight"
and may you have
pleasant dreams...

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-18 12:49 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your beautiful loving heart shines in all your gorgeous words! (big hugggsssss) May all your dreams come true and flood with the light of happiness always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2002-01-18 07:27 AM

A haunting dream indeed. I like the way you wrote this, much longing and feeling

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

6 posted 2002-01-18 08:04 AM

This was so beautiful

Nice and light

Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

7 posted 2002-01-18 11:09 PM

beauty flows within this poem...enjoyed immensely...

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2002-01-18 11:38 PM

Loneheart - this is exceptional, I look forward to seeing more of your writings...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-01-19 05:14 AM

Excellent writing...James

texasrose
Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

10 posted 2002-01-19 10:18 AM

Enjoyed this one very much.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2002-01-19 10:21 AM

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

A soft wind blows,
The tears of time fall
As dawn’s soft light awakens me
A gentle soul has become my destiny
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This is so soft and beautiful. It caresses the emotions and touches the soul.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

dawn to dusk
Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 68
Colorado

12 posted 2002-01-19 11:53 AM

"The tears of time fall".....I love that line. Good work! I like this a lot. It flows well.

Noelle

"Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

13 posted 2002-01-19 11:59 AM

*sigh* how does one responde to the perfect goodnight...this wonderful poem goes into my library where I am free to read it again and again...for it is filled with all the stuff dreams are made of. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

14 posted 2002-01-19 06:46 PM

Beautiful words, much enjoyed this.
Sandra

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