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Sunset
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0 posted 2002-01-16 10:12 PM


Beginnings
should be savored with gentleness and
Pause of wonder
Where voices and thoughts can wander side by side
Slowly entwining here and there
Eyes wide open
As so not to miss the intricate blending
of rare occasion
Where one soul just might meet another
as if to say
"Hello again"

© Copyright 2002 Sunset - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2002-01-16 10:17 PM


very interesting. . . this speaks on a lot of levels. . .

what if two souls meet again for the first time???

great ponderings here Sunset. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Morcastlin
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2 posted 2002-01-16 10:20 PM


Ooh, this was a real thought provoker!!! Great job, I enjoyed reading it!
Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-16 10:27 PM


Oh yes...I love the way you have put this...It makes so much sense. **big hugs** "hello again"

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rebekah33
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4 posted 2002-01-17 12:35 PM


Beautiful post, especially for a romantic like me It reminds me of a line from Nsync (don't laugh!) in This i promise you:
"I've loved you forever,
In lifetimes before"
thanks for sharing..
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

Sunshine
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5 posted 2002-01-17 07:04 AM



I like the weave of this...well done...!

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2002-01-17 06:22 PM


You know, I really like this, I mean it's simple
and yet, it says a whole lot.  Yep, I like this
a lot.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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7 posted 2002-01-17 06:27 PM


Sunset this was just beautiful. floria
jwesley
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8 posted 2002-01-17 06:45 PM


Wonderful write, Sunset.

jwesley

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Gaia
9 posted 2002-01-17 07:23 PM


Hello, Sunset. Meeting again, or for the first time,
"Where voices and thoughts can wander side by side
Slowly entwining here and there
Eyes wide open"
What wonderful thoughts!

Sunset
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10 posted 2002-01-17 07:54 PM


Thank you so much everyone.  I have truly enjoyed being able to stop in and read, and even to occasionally write again for nothing but the true enjoyment of it.  
You are all very kind.  

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