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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-01-16 04:38 PM


I bloom just like a flower
In the garden of your love
I become the brightest star
In your constellation high above

How recklessly I dive
Into your sensual sea
Such enormous waves of desire
Seem to wash right over me

You're my oasis in the desert
Such a welcoming sight you are
I have climbed the peaks of your passion
And wished upon your shooting star

You're the pillow where I lay
After travelling many paths
You and I together have discovered
The finest love to forever last

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Canuckster
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1 posted 2002-01-16 04:40 PM


Beautiful images and a full expressive poem that anyone would be honored to receive in referencre to their impact on a nother person.   Thanks for putting this up for me to enjoy.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-16 04:43 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (smiles) It makes me so happy to feel your joy of truly found love in your words, may He forever lie beside you and be the pillow at night that makes you dream happily! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, you truly are a Queen of Romance! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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3 posted 2002-01-16 05:22 PM


*sigh* sensually stunning. I love the way your wrote this poem using nature. Absolutely magnificent. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rosepetals25
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4 posted 2002-01-16 05:37 PM


Suetang,

   Awwwwwww. I really like this Enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

J. K. Mitchell
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5 posted 2002-01-16 05:46 PM


Dynamic!  You are so good.
Irish Rose
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6 posted 2002-01-16 06:00 PM


I love nature and I love reading words like this about love,
about tieing it all in together.  I can't wait for spring!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

sodpossom
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7 posted 2002-01-16 06:03 PM


Lovely images.Nice job!
Dark Angel
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8 posted 2002-01-16 11:37 PM


I bloom just like a flower
In the garden of your love


Sigh... A beautifully romantic write
Most enjoyed.


~Angel of darkness~

D.Lester Young
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9 posted 2002-01-16 11:58 PM


You're the pillow where I lay
After travelling many paths
You and I together have discovered
The finest love to forever last

I liked the last stanza best. I am also seek someone to share a path with special blessings for both.

N orth Carolina Girl
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10 posted 2002-01-17 11:02 AM


Sue,I really liked the way you describe this love.Here is a flower for you and your great poem.





Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Suetang
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11 posted 2002-01-17 04:24 PM


Thank you all for your beautiful and inspiring words.  Juanita, how very thoughtful you are and thank you so much for the beautiful flower.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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