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Images Of You
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Images Of You |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Images of you are found In a clear blue mountain stream How they fill up all my senses And become part of my beautiful dream Images of you Always help my heart to mend How much I trust you with my soul Someone I always can depend Images of you Show through my pen as I write Beautiful visions of you Visit me throughout the night Images of you Make my feelings overflow As my heart starts beating faster And my love continues to grow Images of you Are in every love song I hear Our precious times together Are to me so very dear Images of you Remain with me every day Within my photographic memory Is where your image will always stay My search for love is now over My soul's not lonely anymore You've opened up my heart And found the key to its door Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I'm so happy to see your search for happiness is complete and love now fills your heart, for you deserve the greatest joy always! May loves symphony forever sing in you, sweet friend! We all love you so much, sweet friend! YAY!!! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Very good formula and the repeating use of the inrto line is very effective. The photographic memory line just clinches the metaphore wonderfully. Good job. |
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